Tried reading this. It's seems written by an 11th grader, who has drank too many lattes for the first time. It would benefit from cutting down the comic book type cliché language by a tad.
I had to laugh at an earlier observation of a homeless guy being kicked out of the UCI encampment by the protestors.
EDIT: Hal Holbrook wasn't wrong when he said the change in the audience over the years for his Mark Twain show was a quickly dwindling ability to appreciate satire.
